School Gate

The day began like every other day
no hint of what was to happen
taking the children to school
she saw a man near the gates

He smiled at her and tipped his cap
tall and handsome around her age
sadly when she came out he was gone
with a sign she walked on to work

The sun was blazing down baking all
so she took her sandwich outside
sitting at a bench in the local park
she espied him running in the distance

His long legs eating up the ground
he soon disappeared from sight
longing to meet and talk to him
she sat there as long as she dared

Reluctantly returning back to work
day dreaming about him passed the time
at last it was time to collect the kids
again he was waiting as they came out

She noticed him with two children
but when she turned right he went left
wondering why she had not seen him before
sad that he seemed happily married

For the next few days she kept seeing him
mainly he was far off in the distance 
Until one day arriving early at the gates
she saw him waiting there for his kids

Shyly she stood nearby giving him a smile
he walked over and started to chat
she soon learned they were his nieces
and he was helping out his sister

His sister's husband was away fighting
and was deployed in the middle east
as he was between jobs and she pregnant
he helped by taking the girls to school

Slowly their feelings turned to love
she had lost her husband to war in Iran
and he had lost his wife to cancer two years ago
against the odds once more they both found love 

written 05/17/2014   

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Callus Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 4:46 AM
Very enjoyable read! First impressions count, though they might deceive. Glad there was a happy ending:) Congrats on your win. // paul
Raj Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Very smoothly done a great fairy tale of sorts. Throughly enjoyed the read. Congrats on a great win. Keep in touch
A. Sharma Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 6:54 AM
A lovely write Shadow ! There's really no time n age bar for love ,,, when one is fortunate to find ! Congrats on win !
Walker  Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena
May Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:53 AM
A lovely story Shadow...congrats on your win
A   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:26 AM
SHADOW,, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
Akter  Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 11:50 PM
Great
Anish Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:28 PM
A moving and heartwarming tale here. Nice job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:06 AM
What a wonderfully weaved love story! Love it!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 4:09 AM
Excellent write. End with beautiful love. Enjoyed reading it . Tfs
Ponce Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:14 PM
You're a poetic force to be reckoned with, Ms. Hamilton. I'm in absolute awe.
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:36 PM
this is a marvelous story and reminds me of some country songs that deal with this kind of topic: the meeting of lonely hearts. Well done.
Devonshire Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Dear Shadow, As the story in the poem unfolded, I went from distrusting this man to loving him too. How kind he was to help out with his nieces. This must be a true story. So beautifully written. I loved every line! Carolyn
Horne Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 1:45 PM
what a heart-warming ending - lovely write, my friend
A   Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 3:25 AM
hello Shadow, at first I felt creeped, by the imagery of the man by the gate.. However, it ended with a warm smile...Love happens... love Linda
Hamilton Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:24 AM
I was unsure which way I was going to take it lol ty Linda hugs
Hamilton Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:23 AM
I was unsure which way I was going to take it lol ty Linda hugs
Allison Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 7:29 PM
had me hooked from beginning to end and i do love the happy ending.verse 8 it should be 'him' hugs Jan xxx
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