School Days

School days are like a box of toys,
for some it's hell, for some pure joy.
For some learn fear, and others glory,
like once upon a bedtime story.
Who gets picked...who's left behind,
who stands alone...who drops behind.
If your shiny and new, you get picked from the start,
if your missing a piece, your used for your parts.
If your wealthy and beautiful...you come out ahead,
and for those who are less fortunate
not much can be said.
In these years of learning and growing you see,
your forming opinions of both you and me.
Will you judge me a winner or quite a bit less,
will I overcome it or be labeled an emotional mess?
                                                                           P.R. Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tran Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 12:57 PM
YOU SEND ME BACK TO MY SCHOOL DAYS. JUST REMINISCING. THE GOOD O'DAYS!! WHAT YOU WROTE IS SOOO TRUE. A+ FOR YOU!!
Deremer Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:33 PM
thank you. I am pretty new at this too.
Bocsa Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:28 AM
Beautiful verses reminding my own experience from both sides .Best regards and wishes.
Deremer Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Thank you for your comment.
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