Scent of the Good Life

Smoke rises in every direction,
staining blue skies with pale shades of grey;
Molten coals--they deliver convection,
to the meats laid an orderly way,
busily emanating aromatic bouquets.

Termed 'Barbecues' or 'Pickin's--by plain folk,
toiling sunrise till often sunset;
to dispense the real magic in hot smoke,
produced by mere gas or briquette,
and the labors of pure human sweat.

In the end, wafting smoke teases senses,
anticipating succulence traced;
to 'cookouts' that sometimes mend fences,
tween those who oft gather in haste,
for that scent of 'the good life,' in taste!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Congrats, Michael. Love the smell of cooking out. Well deserved.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Michael. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:07 PM
I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for your participation in the contest. Congrats on it being on the winners' list. Sara
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:41 PM
such vivid imagery Michael i can almost smell those scents:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gupta Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:03 PM
The wafty smoke is indeed nice ... congratulations on your nice win ...
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michael! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Your imagery and empathy are amazing. Good read.
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