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LIND30NR
Created by Robert Lindley. Four lines whose total number of syllables adds up to 30 or a 7/7/7/9 verse, which is unrhymed.

I can smell the scent of spring, an earthy, rainy day smell. And I can hear a robin, scratching at the lawn, digging up worms. (LIND30NR) 03/03/2022 LIND30NR Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2022 8:58:00 PM

Great imagery, Emile, congratulations on your win. Blessings

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2022 8:12:00 AM

Thanks, Eve, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2022 11:03:00 AM

This brought a smile to my face Emile. Thank you for the joy of spring conveyed in your winning poem. Congratulations! I hope you enjoy St. Patrick’s Day my friend. Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2022 1:26:00 PM

Thanks, Connie, the mere thought that my words brought a smile to your face is all the motivation I need to keep writing. Blessings my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/17/2022 9:36:00 AM

Spring indeed has an "earthy" and distinctive perfume. Enjoyed this very much Emile. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of spring as she returns in robins and rain.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2022 1:22:00 PM

Thanks, Sam, I welcome the blessings of spring, my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 8:46:00 AM

Zen mediation has these aspects. Great work. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2022 1:20:00 PM

Thanks, Christuraj, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/3/2022 9:57:00 AM

Well done, Emile. The LIND30 format reminds me of an American/English style of tanka. I like it, especially since it provides for several options.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2022 1:32:00 PM

Thanks, Milit, I like the form as well and I will be using it more often, my friend, Emile.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/3/2022 7:55:00 AM

Great write. Your imagery, picture perfect; setting the stage for Spring. I particularly like this form, it allows the poet to be creative with a short yet impactful message. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2022 8:34:00 AM

Thanks, Paulette, your comments are as warm as a spring day, my friend, Emile.