Scent of Spring

I can smell the scent of spring, an earthy, rainy day smell. And I can hear a robin, scratching at the lawn, digging up worms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Roper Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Great imagery, Emile, congratulations on your win. Blessings
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Eve, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:03 AM
This brought a smile to my face Emile. Thank you for the joy of spring conveyed in your winning poem. Congratulations! I hope you enjoy St. Patrick’s Day my friend. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 1:26 PM
Thanks, Connie, the mere thought that my words brought a smile to your face is all the motivation I need to keep writing. Blessings my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Spring indeed has an "earthy" and distinctive perfume. Enjoyed this very much Emile. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of spring as she returns in robins and rain.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Thanks, Sam, I welcome the blessings of spring, my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Zen mediation has these aspects. Great work. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Thanks, Christuraj, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Well done, Emile. The LIND30 format reminds me of an American/English style of tanka. I like it, especially since it provides for several options.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Thanks, Milit, I like the form as well and I will be using it more often, my friend, Emile.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Great write. Your imagery, picture perfect; setting the stage for Spring. I particularly like this form, it allows the poet to be creative with a short yet impactful message. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Thanks, Paulette, your comments are as warm as a spring day, my friend, Emile.
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