Scent of Paradise

The sweet scent of her young perfume
Silently waffled into my loud nose
Graciously choking me to sweet rest of death;
And along with her warm waves I sailed well
Into the bottomless abyss of boiling Paradise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vincent Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 4:01 AM
Thanks Sun, I'm indebted to you. :)
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 8:32 AM
- A lovely poem, Messoh - hugs // Sun :)
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