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Scent of a Memory

Scent of a memory 16/05/2015 The old man ambled by, a scent caught my eye. A memory long dispatched, elicited and slowly hatched. My Pops lounge room, musty never seen a broom. His kind warm smile... takes me back a while. Hard man as he was, he knew my Nan was boss. House crowded in smoke, a chewy Mentos for her throat. Statues in their yard, of white stone so hard. My mind is transported, sights a smells distorted. House seems so large, with a twenty car garage. I can smell the river, and my Nana cooking liver. It’s like I’m there today, yet in my memory they stay. Now long gone in time, rest at Rookwood in a shrine.

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Date: 5/19/2018 10:10:00 PM
Jeff, I love your line "a scent caught my eye". Congrats on your win.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/21/2018 9:02:00 PM
Yeah I think it is a fav of mine
Date: 5/16/2018 9:41:00 PM
Jeff, your nostalgic poem of scent triggered cherished memories is heartfelt and heartwarming and your poetic lines of reminiscences gently touched and nicely warmed my heart. I enjoyed your special write. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/16/2018 10:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan for your very kind words
Date: 5/16/2018 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories. I have scent memories which are special. Well done.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/16/2018 10:04:00 PM
They can really be very confronting and emotive can’t they
Date: 5/16/2018 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Jeff, on your win!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/16/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thank you L J

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