Scent of a Memory

Scent of a memory

16/05/2015

The old man ambled by, a scent caught my eye.

A memory long dispatched, elicited and slowly hatched.

My Pops lounge room, musty never seen a broom.

His kind warm smile... takes me back a while.

Hard man as he was, he knew my Nan was boss.

House crowded in smoke, a chewy Mentos for her throat.

Statues in their yard, of white stone so hard.

My mind is transported, sights a smells distorted.

House seems so large, with a twenty car garage.

I can smell the river, and my Nana cooking liver.

It’s like I’m there today, yet in my memory they stay.

Now long gone in time, rest at Rookwood in a shrine.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Jeff, I love your line "a scent caught my eye". Congrats on your win.
Kantor Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Yeah I think it is a fav of mine
Ashley Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Jeff, your nostalgic poem of scent triggered cherished memories is heartfelt and heartwarming and your poetic lines of reminiscences gently touched and nicely warmed my heart. I enjoyed your special write. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kantor Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Thank you so much Susan for your very kind words
Gentry Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories. I have scent memories which are special. Well done.
Kantor Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 10:04 PM
They can really be very confronting and emotive can’t they
Carber Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Congrats Jeff, on your win!
Kantor Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Thank you L J
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