Heidi Sands Poet Sijo

Scenic Memories

Winter hangs onto the top of the mountain with some snow
Spring has taken over below, with greenery, flowers and warmth
While cold memories are transformed in the miles of beauty

Heidi Sands

5/24/18

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Anisha Dutta May 29, 2018 at 11:28 AM Enjoyed your poem. Trying this form for first time. Best wishes. Heidi Sands May 29, 2018 at 12:43 PM I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comment :)

Mystic Rose Rose May 25, 2018 at 9:48 AM I love the third line and the metamorphosis of a seasons reign . Thank you for sharing your smart eye and nifty pen Heidi. Have a great day Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 9:57 AM Thank you very much Pixie :)

Mike Gentile May 25, 2018 at 7:56 AM I love the line, cold memories transformed, Heidi, A wonderful Sijo. Happy Friday !!! Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 8:12 AM Thank you Mike. I am happy you like it. Happy Friday! :)

Yazmin Malik May 25, 2018 at 6:45 AM Lovely <3 Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 7:07 AM Thank you Yazmin. :)

Tom Cunningham May 25, 2018 at 1:58 AM You're becoming the sijo queen Heidi. Tom. Thankfully winter becoming a distant memory. Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 7:06 AM Not really Tom lol. I have only done 2. Yes, thankfully winter is gone for now. We have a touch of it left on the distant mountain here. Thank you for your comment :)

Joseph May May 24, 2018 at 7:09 PM A lovely Sijo Heidi...best wishes Heidi Sands May 24, 2018 at 7:16 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit May 24, 2018 at 4:07 PM Lovely contrast between the images..beautiful poem. Heidi Sands May 24, 2018 at 5:18 PM Thank you so much Vijay :)