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Scattered Words

by Michael J Falotico Words written across the sky.. Will find their mark which is your eyes.. Thoughts scattered across my mind.. Become a poem for you to find.. My heart opens and closes by the day.. We just need to be on the same course to play..

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2011 4:27:00 PM

I really like you title for this, Michael! and yup, I think we are all bound by words, truly a beautiful thing-- hugs your way ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 4:57:00 PM

Great poem, Michael, and I especially like the last line. People, especially families, used to be so close in decades past. Now we are all swirling inour own orbits. Beautiful thoughts about finding love, even when a "heart opens and closes" repeatedly. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/29/2011 2:01:00 PM

This is quite an exceptional write hun, I especially love your last line.. Hope you had a great week Michael, lfde Wilma

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/26/2011 12:14:00 PM

Aww... I loved the rhyme, I loved the meaningful text contained... very sweet, Michael :)

James Peranteau

Date: 7/26/2011 11:06:00 AM

Awesome write Michael ! Some soul it sounds, has your heart all wrapped up dear poet ! *smiles* Great write ! Have a wonderful week sir....much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2011 9:54:00 AM

It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Michael J. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your magnificent work. Love, Carol

Tim B

Date: 7/26/2011 12:45:00 AM

Another excellent poem, Michael you paint a lovely picture here with few words. The first couplet is a great starting point for the rest of the "thoughts scattering". Well done, thanks for sharing!

Cory Long

Date: 7/25/2011 7:40:00 PM

this was beautifully written.. I love everything about it... cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2011 6:08:00 PM

fascinating words across my eyes Michael as the beauty of these lines is both poignant and pristine luv... words that radiate tenderness and luv... imagination and care... luv and beyond... always a refreshment to read u Michael luv.. your Jersey Girl is solo again.. oh.. half went well ...half is suspended in space... and your words are allowing me to breathe ..forever and always luv..