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Scattered Stars...

old souls wink at us through the flickering firefly glow but to notice you must allow your ticking clock to slow only then can you get lost in the spectacular wonder without the distracting crackle of a summer thunder sometimes I just glide through buttercup fields at night and soak up the scattered starry moonlight but people don’t seem to do that kind of thing very often so us awaken dreamers must sand down the rough edges of others in hopes that someday they will have a chance to soften

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/30/2009 7:38:00 PM
soup mail Mr. Stedman
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Date: 6/28/2009 4:24:00 PM
i am an awaken dreamer----------and i love what i see,whenthings are going wrong thats the comfort i find00i just dream--beautiful these scattered stars of yours--charma
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:08:00 AM
You are so right....so many people today don't slow down enough to soak up the wonders around them. Lovely poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/22/2009 3:24:00 AM
I like how you put Happy thoughts through the thrid poem.It all seems magistic and magical=)
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Date: 6/21/2009 9:24:00 PM
I like the images you evoke... "so us awaken dreamers must sand down the rough edges" Beautiful. Great job, Luke =]
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