Get Your Premium Membership

Scary Ride

Hear the mine cart go clickety-clack Just about to fall off the track! View of place is so vast Please slow down; going to fast! See bones, hear moaning down below Not a place I want to go! Then popping into the sunshine Praise the Lord for powers divine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/15/2011 6:05:00 AM
Great write on the mining adventure Joshua.. a scary ride must be every day down in those dark pits ... very energetic and clever too..appreciate your kind and sweet words on my poetry luv..
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry