Scary Ride

Hear the mine cart go clickety-clack
Just about to fall off the track!

View of place is so vast
Please slow down; going to fast!

See bones, hear moaning down below
Not a place I want to go!

Then popping into the sunshine
Praise the Lord for powers divine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 15, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Great write on the mining adventure Joshua.. a scary ride must be every day down in those dark pits ... very energetic and clever too..appreciate your kind and sweet words on my poetry luv..
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