Scary Feeling

I feel like sl-lit,
i wanna flip.
Let my words rip,
come take a sip.

My phone keeps on ringing,
its chesney hawkins singing.
I get this scary feeling,
she's gönnä nail me for stealing.

I look at the sealing,
wish i knew what was the meaning.
I must start to pray,
every single day.

I'm smoking myself to death,
i need to take a deep breath.
Please don't make me fall,
i don't wanna end it all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bekker Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Hey Dr. Ram and Carol.... Thanx for the comments.... Im new to this.... but writing about my feelings and things that happens and what I do...
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 4:30 AM
It's fine lyric with rhyming
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May 18, 2010 at 3:13 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kobus. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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