Scars of Claws

Eye of the tiger 
Eye of the wolf 
I see shadows
Through fog and smoke  

Whispers of dark 
Whispers of light 
Will anything be alright? 
  
Only darkness captures me 
Stars to guide me  
As I plea  
Can someone see me?
Invisible to all 
I'm not a know it all 

Only the eyes of the predators hunt me down 
Their words like claws  
Only to leave scars in my head 
No way to get away 
Only able to pray 
Is there anything I could say?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 13, 2017 at 4:36 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Lexi..... congrats on being featured+++++++
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October 27, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Lexi,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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October 19, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Lexi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 19, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Hi Lexi welcome to poetrysoup I hope you get a lot of enjoyment from it. I'm liking your poem and hope to read more from you. A big welcome hug. xx
Sands Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:13 AM
This is powerful. Good job Lexi. Have a nice day.
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