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Scars Left Behind

cigarette burns
up and down her left arm
morse code s.o.s

1/20/13
Black Eyed Susan

darkdepressionsenryu

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Bernard Colasurdo

April 20, 2013 at 8:34 PM

Hi Susan, Wow! said it so perfectly succinct. Congratulations!!! Sent you a soup mail

Dinda Minardi

March 17, 2013 at 10:18 AM

so many deliver with only so little words. greatly penned, Susan.

Cynthia Alvez

February 8, 2013 at 7:27 PM

Now is the time for all good friends to do something! Nice Senryu Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2013 at 5:57 PM

Yayyy, I see you got a win. Big congrats, Susan.

Poet Destroyer A

February 7, 2013 at 11:01 AM

congrats..PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 7, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Belated Conrats on your top spot Susan xx

Debbie Guzzi

February 6, 2013 at 7:00 PM

Wowser! You sure addressed the issue head on and with so few words! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

February 5, 2013 at 6:52 PM

Very well written and very real problem. Congrats

Connie Gildersleeve

February 5, 2013 at 6:42 PM

Powerful words. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Nathan D.

January 31, 2013 at 10:03 AM

very cool write very true also

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2013 at 6:55 AM

DANGEROUS, DANGEROUS ....... HELP! - STOP SMOKING! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2013 at 11:43 PM

soupmail

Jack Horne

January 26, 2013 at 2:20 PM

love this powerful and scary write, Susan. Thanks very much - great contest : )

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2013 at 6:49 AM

Hi, Susan, just stopping by your newest poem again. Hope to see you over here more often!

Len Gasun

January 22, 2013 at 9:37 AM

This is an excellent and beautifully sad Senryu my dearest friend, Susan! Thank you so much for sharing! I hope you're doing well. I'm missing one of my fav. poets, also one of my reasons of stopping by. Have a great day always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Carrie Richards

January 20, 2013 at 5:30 PM

Wow......this is dark, dramatic, and somber. well done. ps.....and many thanks, Susan, for my placement in "Taken". An honor it was !!

Kim Merryman

January 20, 2013 at 1:27 PM

Great senryu, Susan. Dramatic! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2013 at 11:46 AM

I LIKES it, Susan!!! I know you can give us even more than that though. Surely you have written others recently. Post them up!!! and try some of the contest themes. It's great to see you here today.