Scars

Big or small
They tell a story
On someone short or tall
It's something about glory
Or how they had to crawl

Some people look away
Some people look in disbelief 
Some forget that day
Others live in grief

Wounds to heal
Days to forget
Times to kneel
No time to sweat

They may never share
Of that tragic day
Or they may not even care
About what you have to say

We give them space
We look to the stars
We don't look at their face
We just leave them with their scars

*Written on March 23, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/26/2012 5:09:00 PM
What a captivating and deep write. I'm loving it, Lily.
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 3/27/2012 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Mister Danny Stinson, I'm glad my you love my work -Lily <3
Date: 3/24/2012 5:51:00 PM
Very well written, touching poem Lily.Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 3/27/2012 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I always enjoy your comments :) I hope you had a lovely weekend -Lily <3
Date: 3/24/2012 11:41:00 AM
A touching write... and true.
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Date: 3/24/2012 9:59:00 AM
very true many wounds have a tell behind them good write =) -edwaard
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 3/27/2012 8:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and taking the time to read this :) -Lily <3
Date: 3/23/2012 6:48:00 PM
Very true...loving your work Lily :)
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:12:00 PM
Well thank you ma'am, I always enjoy admirers -Lily <3
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