Hiya Sharma Poet Haiku

scarlet symphony hiku

      leaves of sun 
                         k i s s e d  love 

   lip s   n
           y    c    sweet   s 
                                       i g h
                                              s   of soul stars ~
               scarlet symphony

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Howard Kerr September 6, 2026 at 2:02 AM Majestic hiku, Hiya. A dreamlike colourful assembly of words and images that leap from the page and last in the memory. Each word is a golden hinge in the overall narrative. Layout quite original too.🔥✨⭐🌸 Warmth and care, Howard

Karen Croft July 18, 2026 at 7:23 PM Beautiful melody.

Dorothy Gibbons June 28, 2026 at 11:48 AM Love this creative haiku makes me want to read more of your work hugs Hiya happy writing hugs <3

Karen Croft April 22, 2026 at 6:54 PM A beautiful haiku

Jeanette Swan September 2, 2025 at 6:02 AM I like the leaf-soul-stars tin letter form, that make the Autumn symphony in colour, like kisses. (That's how I'm reading it; though, it could be lovers under the tree's glory). J :)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 27, 2025 at 10:42 AM Hello Hya, I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day /Darlene/

Robert Sidwell August 19, 2025 at 11:32 AM Exquisite haiku! Each word perfection!

sara Etgen-Baker July 14, 2025 at 8:57 AM captivating Haiku!

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 12, 2025 at 4:38 PM I love this gorgeous haiku, as well as its perfectly befitting title. Wonderfully written! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2025 at 5:26 AM - Lovely and creative, Hiya :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2025 at 5:24 PM Oh I love this!

Paige Hind July 6, 2025 at 5:48 PM This is soooo beautiful, Miss Hiya. <3 What an image-

Sotto Poet July 5, 2025 at 4:41 PM Wow, dear Hiya. This outstanding haiku poem explores the themes of love and nature, combining imagery of leaves and sunlight with feelings of attachment and nostalgia. It implies a deep, almost cosmic tie between lovers, with nature serving as the backdrop for their interactions. Best for a win

Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2025 at 11:53 AM Your "scarlet symphony hiku" is a creative/fun write and shape. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away..........

Joseph May July 5, 2025 at 8:01 AM I enjoyed your soul stars symphony Hiya, best wishes

Anne Winter July 5, 2025 at 7:12 AM Dear Hiya, a splendid haiku! Loved it! <3 <3

Sara Kendrick July 5, 2025 at 4:19 AM Some alliteration slipped in there to liven it up. Creative work. Way to go. If for a contest, it read like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K