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scarlet symphony hiku

leaves of sun k i s s e d love lip s n y c sweet s i g h s of soul stars ~ scarlet symphony

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Sotto Poet

Date: 7/5/2025 4:41:00 PM

Wow, dear Hiya. This outstanding haiku poem explores the themes of love and nature, combining imagery of leaves and sunlight with feelings of attachment and nostalgia. It implies a deep, almost cosmic tie between lovers, with nature serving as the backdrop for their interactions. Best for a win

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/5/2025 11:53:00 AM

Your "scarlet symphony hiku" is a creative/fun write and shape. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away..........

Joseph May

Date: 7/5/2025 8:01:00 AM

I enjoyed your soul stars symphony Hiya, best wishes

Anne Winter

Date: 7/5/2025 7:12:00 AM

Dear Hiya, a splendid haiku! Loved it! <3 <3

Tom Woody

Date: 7/5/2025 5:12:00 AM

This combines nature with sensuality tastefully, sweetly, creatively. Well done Hiya

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2025 4:19:00 AM

Some alliteration slipped in there to liven it up. Creative work. Way to go. If for a contest, it read like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K