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Scarlet Season

I can make a delightful thought appear upon the liquid crystalline dispaly. I can make a woman cry and I can make an enemy bloody; I can make a place. I can make a holy place in the dirt, a place rimmed with autumn's cornshucks and cold failures. And in this meager courtyard, upon this altar I will plant a tree, a remnant of what good there was. May it furnish us fruit for eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/10/2009 4:45:00 AM
Just wonderful..best line for me was 8....line 4 display....Light & Love (ps probably just a typo!)
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:42:00 AM
Excellent work Geoffrey! I like this. Goes to my favs.! Thank you for your comments! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:45:00 AM
don't hurt any women ;) but you can make a holy place any time. luvit!------Ell
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:41:00 AM
Beautiful Fibonacci, very touching! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:16:00 AM
Dont make a woman cry.On this Scarlet season:)make a holy place in the dirtmthat would be beautiful--Charma
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