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Scar Tissue

Some wounds cut too deep Inflamed and bleeding again... Mended but not healed For Black Eyed Susan's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2012 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Tim. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/2/2012 10:59:00 PM

Lovely Tim. Many congrats for this win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 1:29:00 PM

HI TIM, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD

Kash Poet

Date: 10/2/2012 6:57:00 AM

So true Tim!Great senryu.Congrats on the win.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/2/2012 3:28:00 AM

You've said it best - to mend does not mean to heal - truth. Congrats on your win!

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/1/2012 9:32:00 PM

how true. well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/1/2012 6:15:00 PM

I seem to pick at those wounds and not let them heal. A deep thoughful senryu. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 2:36:00 PM

yes, and this is not just emotional as the senryu intends. I am never the same since shoulder surgery. BUmmer scar tissue!!! Great thinking, Tim. Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/1/2012 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations Tim, well doen xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2012 7:45:00 AM

Wow, the powerful images you presented to me is tremendous my friend! I am in awe of this incredible write! You have pieced together an awesome picture for us to visualize with this remarkable poem! Your description is enormous and extraordinary, wow Tim! This disease is terrible and very harmful to those that are addicted to it! What a perfect senryu for the contest, you will do well, Great Work!!