Scar of the Tear

Tear
A word with dual Meanings,
The effect of an emotion 
And then the other;
To rip apart into pieces 

My Scar of the tear,
Etches on my body in different concepts
One i got from mother nature on my thigh
111 of thorn marks
I fell and got back up
I rose and didnt die

One from a stray Dog
Wasnt her fault though,
Weary she had been from before
From her own scars that she bore
I think somehow her tail got broke,
From the way it looked,
It had been slammed into a door

The last from a car wreck
Airbag didnt deploy
And my teeth penetrated above the upper lip
Leaving 2 small lines scared probably forevermore
It was my fault i admit 
Shouldnt have trusted myself that day
My head had been filled with her hateful noise
Took a second to long
And the 3rd happening tore the veil
And a part of me became void
Only to rise again, hoping it can be filled
With patience, i await it
Like a song by pink floyd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/9/2018 7:20:00 AM
Excellent, i agree on your thoughts on the tear... Sorry about your bad experience in he last stanza..
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Justin Worthy
Date: 12/9/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thanks silent one and its alright, everything happens for a grander design i think.
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