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Say Goodbye

The vibrant colors on my canvas run together like water from a faucet. Painting a picture of chaos, burning the threads of my sanity. My malleable mind treading water, losing contact with reality. My brow is damp with sweat, as I ponder taking the route to oblivion.A vision so crisp it renders me speachless. Now I'm tasting sweet bliss as I say good bye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/30/2008 10:40:00 PM
Very graphic . It made me sad. Taking ones life.I felt the turmoil from within. So realistic scary. Hope there never is a good bye. Michael and janice God bless you
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