Say Goodbye

The vibrant colors on my canvas
run together like water from a faucet.
Painting a picture of chaos,
burning the threads of my sanity.
My malleable mind treading water,
losing contact with reality.
My brow is damp with sweat,
as I ponder taking the route
to oblivion.A vision so crisp
it renders me speachless.
Now I'm tasting sweet bliss
as I say good bye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 30, 2008 at 10:40 PM
Very graphic . It made me sad. Taking ones life.I felt the turmoil from within. So realistic scary. Hope there never is a good bye. Michael and janice God bless you
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