Notes About The Poem

Say Carpe Diem- and Enjoy



Kids never let a rainy day
     deter enjoying a fun time;
no matter what, they go and play
     regardless of the adverse clime.

They never save a sunny day
     because tomorrow it may rain;
put it aside, pack it away-
     use when the weather's bad again.

For adults, rainy days do change 
     our thinking on what's best to save.
Life's joys we sometimes rearrange-
     stack them away and think it brave.

We must not put aside today
     to save in rainy days' dark bank.
Tomorrow can be whisked away
     forevermore, shut down, left blank.

So live today through rain or shine,
     and like a child, spend all your joy.
No need to save life's gifts, resign-
     say Carpe Diem, and enjoy!


September 11, 2018

Contest: Latin Lessons Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Margarita Lillico 

Carpe Diem: Latin, means seize the day; enjoy the 
present, as opposed to placing all hope in the future.
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Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:07 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. I enjoyed the form of rhyme that you chose to put your thoughts down about the picture. Thank you for participating in my contest. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Sara, for the fine contest and my nice placement and comments. Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Excellent interpretation of the picture with spot on rhyming, Sandra:) my heartiest congratulations on your podium win:)
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thank you very much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Rowe Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 8:28 PM
This is wonderful. It is important to balance saving for a rainy day with enjoying the sunshine. A lesson children know naturally and adults (like you said) think it brave to forget. A very thought provoking write.
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thank you so much, Jesse. Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:54 AM
WONDERFUL poem, Sandra! Janice
Haight Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Warrior Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Lovely crafted Sandra...sure to win my friend...love & rainy days...^WW^
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Thank you so much, WW, for your very positive comment! Sandra :)
Raynes Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:41 AM
This is the second test for me on this, I love it, great writing
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, Lewis, for reading my poem and for your positive and supportive comment! Sandra :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:16 AM
You are right, children never save a rainy day, they are all about the now. This poem is darling, Sandra. Good luck in the contest!
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