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Savior

I feel like im in a bowl I fell in this giant hole There is no way to get out Then these birds fly about I see your beautiful face And I feel like im in space You have saved me in more ways than one We always seem to have fun Then I fall down again It seems like I can never win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 9:17:00 PM
A fine rhyming poem
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