Savior

I feel like im in a bowl
I fell in this giant hole
There is no way to get out
Then these birds fly about
I see your beautiful face
And I feel like im in space
You have saved me in more ways than one
We always seem to have fun
Then I fall down again
It seems like I can never win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 16, 2010 at 9:17 PM
A fine rhyming poem
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