Saving Tears

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~~~ Imagine this world with no lullaby? Imagine each eye never to cry tears wept in sorrow, each river run dry? I'd save me some tears to be lulled from on high. ~~~

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Sandra Adams

Date: 9/20/2019 11:31:00 PM

my tears flow in happy times as well as sad times...i am not sure i could imagine, but i like this one, it makes one ponder thoughts...nice penning :)

Hello There
Date: 9/20/2019 11:50:00 PM

As do mine ;) I was just imagining that if all sorrow disappeared, would I miss the comfort He provides in our time of need (like a lullaby) and those tears of gratitude that spill in return. <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/18/2019 5:40:00 PM

A lovely and sweet write! Thank you, Gershon

Hello There
Date: 9/18/2019 9:58:00 PM

It makes me very happy that you appreciated this simple sentiment, Gershon ~ thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/18/2019 7:10:00 AM

It is hard to imagine because tears I believe are needed at many different times of our lives. They do help cleanse the emotions we are feeling, whether sad or happy. Loved this little poem.

Hello There
Date: 9/18/2019 11:19:00 AM

Thank you, Chris ~

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/18/2019 6:58:00 AM

So true--what would life be without the emotions..the cry, the tears..and who who wants to see dry rivers. Well said..enjoyed the read, HT.

Hello There
Date: 9/18/2019 11:16:00 AM

... thank you, Vijay ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 4:36:00 AM

- Touching and lovely written, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There
Date: 9/18/2019 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :) <3