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Saving Grace

Outside my room The light of the moon Autos on the street Create the urban beat Eyes which crave peace When all troubles cease Light up again Through the magic of a pen We all seek a home Which we'll find in a poem Let the magic start We'll find redemption through art!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/19/2009 11:43:00 AM
What a wonderful message packed in this concise poem. I really like this one. So insightful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 6/14/2009 1:46:00 PM
Well I like it... you use a lot of emmotion in every poem I have read of yours... I really like the last stanza... I know i seek a home in what I write and read... truely captured many... and yes I am really big in to the era of king arthur and such... the music inspires a lot of my work actually... also how i got my nickname Aurel... great write -AUREL
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Date: 6/14/2009 11:56:00 AM
yes, I agree Matthew!! Jim
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Date: 6/11/2009 5:57:00 PM
AMEN! So true, Matthew. Writing has definitely saved me from other (destructive) pursuits! Nice write! Donna
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:16:00 AM
Awesome imagery here. Can just feel the moonbeams pouring in, the comforting sounds of the city, as you rest peaceful, become inspired and begin this wonderful poem. Love, Shar
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