Debbie Guzzi Poet Rhyme

Save Our Souls / S.O.S.

What is a soul, this universal Source;
which crosses cultures?
Few among us will deny least forced
the existence, the Sculptor.

Is soul the essence of minds eye;
or, the one true reality mind denies?

What is a soul, a precious gift or curse;
which crosses scriptures?
Ego’s sole vessel to transverse;
the Work in progress, conjures?

Is soul the essence mind denies;
or true vision of celestial , I.

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Joshua Lacey October 13, 2009 at 1:34 PM great poem, seems to be what 's on my mind a lot

Simone Segal September 30, 2009 at 4:07 PM Great poem. and thankyou for correcting my spelling errors!!!! love Simone

Jay Loveless September 29, 2009 at 10:35 AM ohmigod i love this!!!

Sami Al-Khalili September 25, 2009 at 3:18 PM Very thought-provoking. As this immense amount of thinking and this essence of a hidden message towards all. I love this piece, and the ending left me thinking even more. Such a talented poet you are. Love, Sami.

Syed Amaan Ahmad September 25, 2009 at 11:45 AM Profound!

Yoni Dvorkis September 25, 2009 at 10:59 AM Someone on the soup write shape poem in the shape of an I, I read it way back in January when I first joined but I remember him asking some of the same questions. I'm sure John Freeman can field this one with flying colors. My answer can't be all that different from yours, plus I'm no preacher, just a seeker.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo September 25, 2009 at 9:34 AM A different write and strong poem indeed seems it could havebeen longer but it packs a tight punch none the less

Sara Kendrick September 25, 2009 at 7:09 AM The is the mind, will, and the emotion. In todays society it definitely needs an sos. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2009 at 6:07 AM Thank you for sharing your heart with us today Deborah. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse September 24, 2009 at 4:45 PM nicley penned, our soul will rise:)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen September 24, 2009 at 11:00 AM Debbie, This poem has a peacefulness radiating from your words. The soul, the I, finding the celestial forever...free. I really like the thoughts it brings to my mind. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane