Save My Soul From Death Caused By You

i can feel you 
all around me
safety is leaveing
my heart is bleeding
cant you see me
crying black tears
cant you hear me
screaming over here
never denying suicide
thougts entering my sad head
cant you try and 
catch me 
my life is falling
smashing to the ground
save 
my
soul
.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 5:25 PM
nice expressions
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May 14, 2010 at 3:33 PM
strong write
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