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Save My Life

The music plays, throughout my head. Through these dark days, I wish I was dead. Watch my heart, as it was desacrated. I fall apart, for this world I've always hated. I've never, loved this sight. Do not say forever, will be alright. I fall, one last time. Watch as I crawl, amongst my rhyme. It's calling for me, do you hear? I cannot see, my own sorrow filled tear. I will go on, without you. Is the love gone, are we through? Would you save my life, if you only knew? Again another cut from this knife, i didn't want to. Finally, I see the end. No longer "we", for I am my only friend. Could you save, my agonized life? At my grave, do you cry as my wife? Drop your mask, as I have for you. Do I dare ask, "What do I do?" If you show me heaven, I will meet you there. Then, my heart won't tear. Could I change one thing, could I change your mind. Still the sorrow will bring, and the misery I will still find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/5/2008 3:38:00 PM
Sorry I'm botherin you and I DO NOT want to hook up with you AT ALL!!!! I just want to be friends cause I don't have any of those because of my depression and my cutting. . . I'm REALLY sorry. . . I read every single one of your poems last night and I know just how you feel. . . SO, SORRY! ! !
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Date: 10/4/2008 4:09:00 PM
Hey rewrite me on my new poem cause my computer is actin up, Please??
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Date: 10/2/2008 5:30:00 PM
hello?
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Date: 10/2/2008 1:39:00 PM
You me don't you?? Cause I think you blocked me from your comments...
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Date: 10/2/2008 1:28:00 PM
Dude do you have a cell phone??
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Date: 10/1/2008 6:30:00 PM
Hey do you have a cell phone??
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Date: 10/1/2008 5:25:00 PM
Hey wats up??
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Date: 10/1/2008 11:59:00 AM
So did you my messages??
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Date: 9/30/2008 6:51:00 PM
I mean my first newer poem..
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Date: 9/30/2008 6:21:00 PM
If you wrote me then please write on my second poem comments cause my computer is acting up again??
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Date: 9/30/2008 2:07:00 PM
Wats up??
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:46:00 AM
Do you have me blocked or something??
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:44:00 AM
Do you have a Space,My??
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:41:00 AM
I was saying do you have a cause if you do My name is Alexz_Dude or you can go on Day-v and look at his friends and I'm the one with the red hair and white t shirt on.??
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:38:00 AM
I was saying do you have a ??
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:37:00 AM
My Space
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:37:00 AM
Do you have a My Space??
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:36:00 AM
M y Sp a c e
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Date: 9/30/2008 3:27:00 AM
My question is do you have a ??
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Date: 9/29/2008 3:24:00 PM
HELLO??!!
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Date: 9/29/2008 2:00:00 PM
I have a question??
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Date: 9/29/2008 1:15:00 PM
Hey read some of my new stuff... Then I have to ask you something...
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Date: 9/28/2008 4:54:00 PM
I wrote the it is called ?
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Date: 9/28/2008 4:15:00 PM
I have a question...May I write a poem dedicated to you...Cause you've just inspired me??
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Date: 9/28/2008 4:10:00 PM
You know what youre really a sweet guy your friend is VERY lucky to have you...And you seriously should get this published before someone else does *Wink* *Wink*
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