Save Me From You

Torn in the chest I'm bleeding for you
Why don't you save me? Save me from you? 
Your cunnings ways have swept me off my feet
You tortured me.. I'm starting to drowned 
In my own blood,
That's where you left me. 
Metallic and empty
Bright red and runny
You don't care if I hurt 
Or bleed out my chest
You're done with me
You're on to the next
With a knife in your hand you're ready to strike
The next innocent soul that comes in your life
It sickens me that this brings you delight
But you don't care,
To you its just another life
I wonder if you know what you do?
If you really meant to rip me in two? 
Is it still to late to save me from you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lovechild Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Great intensity, I've felt that pain and confusion (and unfortunately enabled it once or twice too)...oh, and it's never too late, just a matter of how and when. Keep up the great writing.
Holliday  Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, I really appreciate all the feed back and the comments!
Linklater Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 10:46 AM
I like this poem sad but full of emotion. Sarah.
Holliday  Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Thank you
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