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Trials and tribulations emerge in the eyes of a woman whose life is spared by lies. Her shell of a soul has been bruised by truth and has seemingly made this woman uncouth. With love in her heart and hate on her back, she rummages through sand to disclose what she lacks. Fire in her veins, bleeding from her ears, and pain has begun to be educed through her tears. Slowly dying fast, in search of relief and desperately needing salvage from the streets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 8/17/2011 3:43:00 PM
Has a very good flow to it, I quite enjoyed it. Thank you and good luck.
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Date: 8/17/2011 3:39:00 PM
5th line from bottom [seduced?] nice write, light & love
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