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Save Me

I found that I can't breathe for the night it chokes my light, and I'm finding it quite hard to see. You alone, could teach me life, help me save me win this fight. Closer come to my skin I have but to whisper my souls within Cant you see it's bigger then you, then me, more significant then life alone don't take it lightly your precautions unknown Why can't you grab my hand, just rescue me, my heart floating, on dark open seas. Open your eyes, just ever so brief, let it rise, you too will see. Perhaps in my rescue, you shall be set free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/25/2008 1:26:00 AM
"perhaps in my rescue, you shall be set free", works both ways... u've saved me plenty =)
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