Save Face

All these lips kissed
and I still felt alone.
As I can't help what I've missed,
I've got too many issues I own.

Imagine us
in another view.
Search the sky
and you'll soon find,
that these stars start
gazing back at you.

On a cloud
up in space.
Watch where were going.

Try to save some face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lacey Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 12:32 AM
A fantastic poem Johnny! I really enjoyed it! ~Michelle~ xo
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:09 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Johnny. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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September 7, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so carol, your comments and advice are much appreciated!
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