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Savanna Sunset

The air quivers
Scorching Savanna sunset
Lions seek their prey

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Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2013 at 8:38 AM

this one has great imagery.

Rollo West

January 25, 2013 at 10:44 PM

Thank you so much Andrea. Rollo

Debbie Duncan

January 11, 2013 at 6:57 PM

love to read haiku, I don't think I write them so well,,, 5,7, 5 ;}

Rollo West

January 12, 2013 at 9:53 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

January 9, 2013 at 10:50 AM

This is an outstanding write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and dynamic poem this afternoon! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West

January 9, 2013 at 10:54 AM

Hello my friend, thank you for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo

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