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I was inspired by the Elephant graveyard. The legendary place where elephants go to die...

Savanna Song

Have you heard?
The old bull elephant has left the herd
With a shuffling gait and weary eye
Underneath the savanna sky
Wandering off all alone
The Sun had spoken 
It was time to come home

Can't you see?
The old bull elephant is finally free
His battle-scarred and furrowed hide
Concealed the pain that raged inside
Off he went so dignified 
Tusks held high with royal pride

Vultures circling in the dawn
Signalled the herd it was time to move on
And the savanna sang a farewell song
The king is gone
The king is gone
The brave king is gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duncan Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Very nice write, I don't believe they should be in zoo's or the circus, I have signed petitions to let them as well as all the animals to be free. Welcome to poetry :)
Martin Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Thanks Debbie :)
Moorman Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Jeff, welcome to Soup! This poem, and others of yours that I read, is well penned. I particularly like the imagery in this poem since I am acquainted with the story behind it. Great write! Look forward to seeing more in the future.
Martin Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Curtis :)
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