Panagiota Romios Poet Rhyme

Savage Love

Savage Love


Consumes one 
day and night.
Memories of 
perspiration and 
firelight.
Oceanic promises 
to stay together.
Remembered, 
feathered, kisses
bright as a peacock 
feather!
Some think memories
only exist in the past.
Wrong, mine are as 
fresh as today's flower 
in a crystal glass!

             
                            5/22/2021
                                 ~2~

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Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2021 at 5:21 PM Ahhhh, everyone should experience memories like these Pangie. I loved this! Blessings xxoo Panagiota Romios May 24, 2021 at 3:48 AM Ah, thank you again. I read your comments to me deeply appreciated, Connie. Yes, such experienced still dance like firecrackers. I never walk the halls of my past. No need to. In me, past and present are one. Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf May 22, 2021 at 8:30 PM Here I am, busy pulling out the fingernails from my ravaged flesh, after another night of frenzied, passionate lust. Ha, ha. lol. Who am I kidding? ... Great write here, Pangie. :) gw Panagiota Romios May 22, 2021 at 9:29 PM Thats hysterical, Gershon. Need-bad aids? Will send, Ravaged flesh! WOWSER! Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu May 22, 2021 at 11:38 AM Hello Panagiota, beautifully done. Flowers last longer in the ground than in a vase. Hugs Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu May 23, 2021 at 3:38 PM Hello Panagiota yes those lines are filled with meanings. You are welcome. Hugs Darlene xx Panagiota Romios May 22, 2021 at 12:49 PM Hello Miss Darlene! I was writing a Poem , not a book on gardening.LOL. And, by the way you are right!.. And Richard and Chantelle noted the beauty of those lines. It is filled with meaning. Thanks Pangie xx

Quoth Theraven May 22, 2021 at 10:47 AM Panagiota, I think Chantelle is on point with her description of your poem 'Savage Love'. Your memories compared to a newly bloomed cut flower in 'fresh as today's flower ~ in a crystal glass!' says so much. A Fave. -Richard Panagiota Romios May 22, 2021 at 11:12 AM I am humbled you Faved this. I never know how to explain this, Richard. The last line as you and Chantelle pointed out, does say it all. I have tried in many poems to get this across. Honored you and Hantelle Faved this. Thank you" you both saw the depth is my simplicity. Awesome, truly, awesome. Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham May 22, 2021 at 9:24 AM A very sensual write Pangie, very happy memories you have.. Tom Panagiota Romios May 22, 2021 at 11:06 AM Dear Talented POTD winner. Sir Cunningham. What a great day. As your friend, truly happy for you! glad you liked this Poem. Celebrate! Hugs, Pangie xx