Saudade of Stars

Dark.
Void.
Burning
all alone
whispering to night.
Remember ancient golden dust,
drifting across the velvet shores of forgotten space,
longing for the distant, devastated worlds they once cradled in silent, blinding light.
Every undefined flicker is a teardrop of purified silver, falling through the endless, empty gulfs where no one ever answers back.
Trapped inside their heavy, illuminated cages of dying fire, they reach out across the impossible expanses of time to touch the phantom shadows of ancient sister spheres that crumbled into stardust long ago.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 18, 2026 at 8:48 PM
Oh my! This is so cosmically beautiful and filled with a plethora of emotions.. that void! The endless abyss! The darkness.. everything you've so meticulously painted with your artistic quill, such detailed descriptions and imagery as well.. "drifting across the velvet shores of forgotten space" and "Every undefined flicker is a teardrop of purified silver" wow the metaphorical depth! "Phantom shadows of ancient sister spheres" your diction here is amazing as well.. soul-stirring! Congratulations on your placement in my contest, dear William a wonderful Fibonacci! sending you best wishes and poetic light 🧚🍁🌙🌙💫
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August 17, 2026 at 4:11 PM
especially liked this line: Every undefined flicker is a teardrop of purified silver outstanding fibonacci! best wishes, sir, with this contest entry.
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