Saudade Of Stars


Our 
paired 
essence 
interweaves   
the longing of stars
with calypso of enticed night,
creates concerto of stardust in garden of night

where timeless yearning written on stars weaves constellation lattice in my starlit sky. 

Through diaphanous resolute psyche in ordained orbit, I follow faded stars, forecasting the fate of the 
lost galaxy of love.

Following the existential stellar essence across the cosmic emptiness to where the stars disappear I 
trace the beauty of memory, glowing like the sinking stars in the remains of everything that was once mine.

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Hiya Sharma

September 18, 2026 at 10:02 AM

Sigh in those sinking stars! In the remains of everything! This is just beyond aching and poignant dear Subimal, how intricately you've woven that sense of longing.. with such exquisite wordsmithery and imagery layered throughout... "Through diaphanous resolute psyche in ordained orbit, I follow faded stars, forecasting the fate of the lost galaxy of love." Oh my! That yearning! deeply heartfelt! "existential stellar essence across the cosmic emptiness to where the stars disappear" felt that! Congratulations on your placement in my contest, pleasure reading, keep writinnn and shininnnn 🧚🍁🍂🌙💫

Subimal Sinha-Roy

September 18, 2026 at 10:15 PM

Thank you, Hiya, for the placement and for the wonderful comments that encourage me to write the way I do.