Saturns Travels

He’s a joyous little fellow and he wears so many rings. Though gasses swirl around him; ice crystals hitch a ride and sing. A celestial traveler, n a quest for many adventures.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:37 AM
Ah, yes, my friend, and he could have also been labelled a personification poem. "ice crystals hitch a ride and sing" makes ice seem so much lovelier than it is. A school bus tipped over yesterday close to me, but luckily the three children and the driver were not hurt. Someone video taped the driver going way too fast on ice though; I imagine he is looking for a new job. Funny whimsical, wonderful poem!
Kiser Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Thanks but, I thought the Sijo form might stand out too much so, I categorized it as a Sijo. Good thing the kids weren't hurt but, I imagine they're still a bit impacted by the whole thing.
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