Saturn - God's Favorite

SATURN    -   GOD’S    FAVORITE


This  floating sovereign rules her black see *
Like an Inquisition bishop  -  perfect : accepts no plea 
No argument no competition,
Watching me watching her in adoration, 
Her cold unblinking eye
Reigning the black and silent sky.


Saturn, Goddess of bountiful harvests, of you alone
Unreachable, O favorite of the Lord, in brilliant isolation,
Of beauty pristine and colder than ice,
Is it said * that God doesn’t play dice,
But His spinning gyroscope globe He enjoys :
God’s spinning top  -  the best of toys.


O bisque queen, gem with halo rings,
Like a dove with wide-spread wings,
Hover like the Holy Spirit, float on the inky blackness,
Send me a message to fill my darkness.
Long in the ether your far-light lingers on high 
Before it is allowed to reach my eye;
O Majesty remote cold and beautiful,
Send me the vision of heavenly beauty bountiful.

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Notes

Beauty turns me on.
Anyone who has seen the planet Saturn even in a small
telescope cannot fail to be awed by the beauty of the planet.

*   A   "see"  is the territory ruled by a bishop

*   The saying  “God does not play dice”  is accredited to Albert Einstein,
when explaining the workings of the universe.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Flanagan Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 2:26 AM
This is an extrordinary poem, I loved it in all aspects!~Tammy~
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August 6, 2012 at 9:35 PM
SIDNEY, Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care. *Luv* PD
Young Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 1:41 PM
I have not yet met Saturn up close and personal-like, but this is a wonderful poem! Congrats! on being featured....~~~*Beauty turns me on too*~~~
Guzzi Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:01 PM
[O bisque queen] such a dreamy romantic write from a mature man with words!!! Certainly a rarity Tanya's a lucky woman. Congrad's on your win to the first round Light & Love
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Sidney. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Sidney congrats on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 9:25 PM
The beauty of a planet very eloquently displayed through a poet's words. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Neels Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Sidney, your titled grabbed my attention and you sure made me curious to see planet Saturn after reading this gem.. Congratulations on your win :)
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!
K. Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Reading this now makes me want to view Saturn through the telescope but I think that your poem is the next best thing to it! Wonderful poem that I really enjoyed reading and very intriguing as to how you related religion with science. Super congrats on your win, Sidney! :D
Richards Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Beauty turns me on, as well, Syd! and yes, I too have been awed by such a thing as small as a 'speck' in the sky (my son is a science teacher, has a wonderful telescope) Love your poem, it is how I also feel while looking at the sky!!
Brown Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in Chris' "A.gain" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Wonderful original take on the theme Congrad's Light & Love
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 8:26 AM
I saw Saturn through a telescope in an observatory in SW Texas. She is marvelously beautiful and terribly stern in her influence 'sisting on boundaries and restraint. Good mother, she, in a fatherly way.. dig the write, Syd, Good day to ya~N
Song Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 8:22 AM
From someone who worships the Creator of the universe, ...a scientifically appropriate and accurate write. Enjoyed your expert descriptions. I bet you have seen the IMAX HUBBLE TELESCOPE Movie, right? Your poem reminded me of it. Wow. Great stuff.
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 7:48 AM
I am in my backyard with my telescope often. Thank you Sydney
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