M. L. Kiser Poet Acrostic

Saturn

S Saturn whirls, twirls, in centrifugal dance
A Around in cosmic ecstasy
T Twirling, turning she’ll entrance.
U Undreamt fantasies woven in her 
R Rings, play out in 4/4 cosmic rhythm in
N Notes of click-clanking, tinkly, icy drums.


5-28-2021
Planet Poetry Contest
 Matt Caliri

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Paula Goldsmith November 25, 2021 at 8:48 AM Congratulations on your win with your "Saturn" Acrostic write. Have a blessed day.......................

Jan Allison November 21, 2021 at 12:13 PM what a lovely acrostic ML, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex November 20, 2021 at 11:15 PM A great acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!

Matt Caliri November 20, 2021 at 8:59 PM Congrats on a 10th place finish in my Planets poem from forever ago. I love the "4/4 cosmic rhythm" line. Fantastic work!

Anisha Dutta July 1, 2021 at 10:18 PM BRILLIANT Too Good

Victor Buhagiar June 28, 2021 at 7:11 AM You did make fun of Saturn in your contest. Made me laugh.

Brian Sambourne June 27, 2021 at 9:28 PM Excellent acrostic. Captures Saturn imaginatively. Good luck in the competition. Be well. Brian