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Saturn

So favored by Selene, he gathers her moons… a collection that enhances a sparkly plethora: Those rings within rings, of ice he holds taut Under his saturnine smiles, they glisten thru regions of black; magic calling each voyager: New wrecks to snare as he revolves taciturn … (5/18/21)

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Date: 11/21/2021 1:25:00 PM
your description is so beautiful Susan, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/11/2021 7:34:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/20/2021 11:13:00 PM
A very beautiful acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/11/2021 7:34:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/20/2021 8:56:00 PM
Congrats on your 8th place finish in my Planet contest. Gorgeous write, it flows magically, with wonderful word choice.
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/11/2021 7:34:00 PM
Thank you for hosting the inspiration:)
Date: 6/29/2021 9:50:00 PM
Hello Susan, What an original acrostic on Saturn. Reads like a winner to me. Best wishes, Brian
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 6/30/2021 7:58:00 AM
thank you, Brian :)
Date: 6/9/2021 2:38:00 PM
I really like your descriptive take on Saturn in this very fine acrostic, Susan! Well done! :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 6/16/2021 10:49:00 PM
thank you :)

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