Saturn

Sun looks smaller from there,
Arid and extremely windy.
Thick atmosphere, floats on water,
Unfathomable in our milky way.
Rings made of chunks of rock and ice,
No true surface, nowhere to stand.


Date of submission: 16/05/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 11:16 PM
A beautiful acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!
Caliri Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 9:01 PM
Congrats on 11th place in my Planets contest from 6 months ago. I loved your direct tone, and simple approach to the subject matter. Well done!
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