L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Saturdays In the Park

I remember those Saturdays in the park
We picnicked and played the live-long day,
As I recall, nothing seemed ominous or stark
I remember those Saturdays in the park,
Softball, horseshoes, badminton ‘til dark
Seems life was filled up with fun and play
I remember those Saturdays in the park,
We picnicked and played the live-long day.   

Written April 2, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger April 2, 2022 at 11:48 PM Yes! "Softball, horseshoes, badminton ‘til dark" YES! L Milton Hankins April 3, 2022 at 9:22 AM Remember those good ol' times!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2022 at 7:23 PM I remember them too. They were marvelous. It is cool to see you doing more triolet. I remember learning of them around 2007. And I wrote a bunch during that time L Milton Hankins April 2, 2022 at 8:27 PM Oh, I've been writing them for years. I sort of think of them as lazy poetry because they are so easy. Then, of course, I developed my trionet form. It's a triolet/sonnet. It's listed under New Poetry Types, I think. Thanks, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham April 2, 2022 at 12:15 PM Happy memories for sure Milton, time moves so quickly but it seems like only yesterday. Tom L Milton Hankins April 2, 2022 at 12:34 PM I'll bet you think of those times, too, with a happy heart, Tom. Thanks for the comment.

Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2022 at 10:32 AM Sounds like a wonderful time! Done so well in a triolet! I truly enjoyed it! L Milton Hankins April 2, 2022 at 11:26 AM Kim, I thank you. I suspect most of us remember such good times when we were growing up.