Saturday Stargazing

I sauntered gently into the lilac dusk to gaze at
The twinkling star on a Saturday. I blew it a kiss, then it 
Winks at me. Out stargazing, under the twilight sky



 
When Three Lines Are So Much Better Poetry Contest/Winner(2nd Place)
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Date written and posted: 06/03/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lindley Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your win, SUCH BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY MY FRIEND..
Ibeh Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, Robert!:-) Much appreciated.
Roper Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Congratulations on your win :) great imagery ,Edward. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Thank you very much, Eve!:-)*hug*
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Very sweet one. I used sijo too. Congrats for the great placement.
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Thank you, Andrea!:-) Glad you liked it. xoxo
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:55 PM
There is no better view than the night sky, lovely image Edward. Congratulations. Tom
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Thank you so much, Tom!:-)
Sands Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations for your win Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Thanks again, Heidi!:-) God bless....
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:11 PM
Your continued support means a lot to me. Thank you, Anne-Lise!*hugs*
One Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Great imagery Edward... congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Thank you very much, SO! I really appreciate you placing me...
Sands Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Beautiful Edward ! :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Many many thanks for the lovely comment, Heidi! xoxo
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