Saturation

snow sits on spring grass
lazy storm sheds arctic tears
swallowed by sunlight


September 4, 2019
One Haiku Poetry Contest
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Allison Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 3:34 PM
so lovely to read this again Lonna, many congrats :-)hugs Jan xx
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Your imagery is vibrant and captivating, Lonna. Such a beautiful haiku. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 4:47 PM
very nicely done, Lorna. Congrats on your win.
Blodgett Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Thanks so very much Andrea!! Lonna
Mcintosh Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:13 AM
Awesome. Congratulations and many blessings for you.
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Beautiful imagery, Lonna. Congrats on your win.
Blodgett Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:14 PM
Loved yours right back!!! Congrats to you too. Lonna
Allison Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:49 PM
love the imagery and use of alliteration:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kinch  Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 4:00 AM
Enjoyed this haiku Lonna, especially the last line.
Blodgett Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Elizabeth, thank you so much for your appreciation. Lonna
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