Saturated With Solitude

SATURATED IN SOLITUDE
The solitary moon moves slow across the still sky Sprinkles silver dust on the seizing elixir of solitude I drink to the dregs as the fluid time passes me by My voice speechless in somber stillness, I know why The trance of clutching aloneness makes me mute. Silence soaks within, saturates my mind with serenity This is what an insular life languished would long to be Lancet sense of solitary self splits my sole identity In the void of loneliness I discover my dormant duality At the silent inner depth I hear me talk with me.
Written : April 14, 2018 April 22, 2020 Contest : Strand Pick B, Any Theme, Any Form Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 6/2/2018 10:18:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/4/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/31/2018 8:16:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on another win!! Well done!
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you once again, Susan.
Date: 5/31/2018 4:30:00 PM
Excellent write, Subimal! So much can be learned in solitude. Many never come close to finding themselves...too immersed in the world. Congrats, my friend!
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Dale.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/29/2018 2:19:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 4/25/2018 6:49:00 AM
Subimal, very nicely written. I can feel your aloneness.
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:18:00 AM
Thank you, James.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Submial. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/25/2018 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/24/2018 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/25/2018 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:58:00 AM
hmmm, I meant to place this higher, I will make the correction. I have been out of sorts lately lol...great poem sweet Subimal :) congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/25/2018 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, Laura so much your consideration and placement.
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Beautiful Scars
Date: 4/24/2018 9:00:00 AM
I changed it from 3rd to 2nd...sorry again be blessed :) -luloo
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