Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

Saturated With Solitude

SATURATED IN SOLITUDE

The solitary moon moves slow across the still sky
Sprinkles silver dust on the seizing elixir of solitude 
I drink to the dregs as the fluid time passes me by
My voice speechless in somber stillness, I know why
The trance of clutching aloneness makes me mute.

Silence soaks within, saturates my mind with serenity
This is what an insular life languished would long to be
Lancet sense of solitary self splits my sole identity
In the void of loneliness I discover my dormant duality
At the silent inner depth I hear me talk with me.

Written : April 14, 2018
April 22, 2020
Contest : Strand Pick B, Any Theme, Any Form
Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 10:18 PM Congrats on your top win, Subimal. Well done. Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:09 AM Thank you, Line.

Susan Gentry May 31, 2018 at 8:16 PM Back to congratulate you on another win!! Well done! Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:09 AM Thank you once again, Susan.

Kim Rodrigues May 31, 2018 at 4:30 PM Excellent write, Subimal! So much can be learned in solitude. Many never come close to finding themselves...too immersed in the world. Congrats, my friend! Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:08 AM Thank you, Kim.

Dale Gregory Cozart May 31, 2018 at 3:35 PM Beautiful. Congrats. Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:08 AM Thank you, Dale.

Eve Roper April 25, 2018 at 9:19 PM Congratulations on your win, Subimal, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`* Subimal Sinha-Roy April 29, 2018 at 2:19 AM Thank you, Eve.

James Inman April 25, 2018 at 6:49 AM Subimal, very nicely written. I can feel your aloneness. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 29, 2018 at 2:18 AM Thank you, James.

Line Gauthier April 24, 2018 at 8:33 PM Congrats on your win, Submial. Well done. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 25, 2018 at 2:26 AM Thank you, Line.

Susan Gentry April 24, 2018 at 5:04 PM Congratulations on your win. Great imagery. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 25, 2018 at 2:26 AM Thank you, Susan.

Beautiful Scars April 24, 2018 at 8:58 AM hmmm, I meant to place this higher, I will make the correction. I have been out of sorts lately lol...great poem sweet Subimal :) congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo Subimal Sinha-Roy April 25, 2018 at 2:26 AM Thank you, Laura so much your consideration and placement. Beautiful Scars April 24, 2018 at 9:00 AM I changed it from 3rd to 2nd...sorry again be blessed :) -luloo