Correagndslkhsj Loaifhshfasjkh Poet Rhyme

Saturated In Solitude

You left me out here,
Alone in the dark and black.
Out of nowhere you disappeared
And I fear,
You might never come back.

Please come back for me…
I feel empty and devalued…
What happened to “we?”
But never came back, did she.
Leaving me saturated in solitude...


4/19/18
For the "Rhyme Time 2" Contest
Sponsored by Laura Loo
Rushed and bad...this won't place, I know...
Wait what?  It did.  Nevermind.
One of the two Fourth Place Winners

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Eve Roper April 25, 2018 at 9:48 PM Congratulations on your win, Connor, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*

James Inman April 25, 2018 at 8:02 AM Nicely written Connor.

Line Gauthier April 24, 2018 at 9:00 PM Well done, Connor. Congrats on your placement with this fine poem.

Susan Gentry April 24, 2018 at 5:51 PM Congratulations on your placement. Could relate to this. Well expressed!

Beautiful Scars April 24, 2018 at 9:04 AM great poem and of course you would place! congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo Correagndslkhsj Loaifhshfasjkh April 24, 2018 at 6:57 PM Thank you for the placement!

Mystic Rose Rose April 22, 2018 at 9:43 AM Often, we miss the person who filled our we's , enjoyed your poem