Get Your Premium Membership

Saturated In Solitude

You left me out here, Alone in the dark and black. Out of nowhere you disappeared And I fear, You might never come back. Please come back for me… I feel empty and devalued… What happened to “we?” But never came back, did she. Leaving me saturated in solitude... 4/19/18 For the "Rhyme Time 2" Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo Rushed and bad...this won't place, I know... Wait what? It did. Nevermind. One of the two Fourth Place Winners

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/25/2018 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Connor, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2018 8:02:00 AM
Nicely written Connor.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2018 9:00:00 PM
Well done, Connor. Congrats on your placement with this fine poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2018 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Could relate to this. Well expressed!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2018 9:04:00 AM
great poem and of course you would place! congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo
Login to Reply
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
Correagndslkhsj Loaifhshfasjkh
Date: 4/24/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thank you for the placement!
Date: 4/22/2018 9:43:00 AM
Often, we miss the person who filled our we's , enjoyed your poem
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things