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Take my life, scatter the pieces all over. I can't seem to suffice, can't grasp our final closure. Why did everything have to end? Or why did it have to begin? Pain is my normal, misery is my everyday, I'm glad our last talk was formal, I'm glad you actually knew what to say. I promise this will be my last good-bye, we'll never walk this hard road again. And this time I know I won't cry, but ill be smiling to myself within.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Serenity. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Serenity. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:03:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Serenity. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:44:00 AM
I love this so much...i dont even know what to say, it just, really really touched me. Thank you for sharing this Serenity.
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:41:00 AM
good title
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:32:00 AM
WOW! Wonderful and very powerful Serenity. Love it! You put in some hard work and thought into this one.
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:18:00 AM
Ok...this is kinda weird....I know..lol
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