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John's a diabetic And should avoid eating anything sweet I found it pathetic And made some biscuits for a treat I made two dozen biscuits And put them in the oven on a tray After I cooked them John ate a dozen straight away

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Date: 6/1/2023 1:43:00 AM
Maybe a doctor could give him some pills and desist from eating the rest of the day.
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Date: 5/31/2023 11:18:00 PM
i am too, diabetic, but slender, john must resist would say a doctor
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Date: 5/31/2023 11:09:00 PM
Sounds like John is normal. Who wouldn't eat fresh-baked biscuits. You only live once, and John is going to make sure that the adage applies to him! ~ gw
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:45:00 PM
Haha….naughty John!!and lucky John!! Haha….Love your fun poem Shirley!! Debx
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