Satisfying

John's a diabetic
And should avoid eating anything sweet
I found it pathetic
And made some biscuits for a treat
I made two dozen biscuits
And put them in the oven on a tray
After I cooked them
John ate a dozen straight away
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Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Maybe a doctor could give him some pills and desist from eating the rest of the day.
Rolland Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 11:18 PM
i am too, diabetic, but slender, john must resist would say a doctor
Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 11:09 PM
Sounds like John is normal. Who wouldn't eat fresh-baked biscuits. You only live once, and John is going to make sure that the adage applies to him! ~ gw
M  Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 6:45 PM
Haha….naughty John!!and lucky John!! Haha….Love your fun poem Shirley!! Debx
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