Satiating Reams

sparkling horizon
burning candle at both ends
red dying ember



(sunset)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:17 PM
very nice, Stephen. Love the middle line, how it makes me percieve the day. LUv, Andrea
Laan Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Stephen, this is beautiful - I love the red embers on the horizon, lovely....a fire sunset.
Anderson Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Very nice Haiku...Jimmy
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January 11, 2011 at 7:46 AM
A wonderful Haiku.. Stephen..linda
Mehta Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 7:26 AM
beautiful images creating nice pen picture, Stephen
Sweetheart Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Lovely imagery Stephen .. could feel thaat burning candle at both ends.. we all do it luv.. your last line speaks volumes luv..enjoyed..
Nutter Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 2:54 AM
Excellent Haiku, red dying ember could relate to the sunrise or my eyes after an all nighter.
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