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sparkling horizon burning candle at both ends red dying ember (sunset)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/13/2011 9:17:00 PM
very nice, Stephen. Love the middle line, how it makes me percieve the day. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 7:59:00 AM
Stephen, this is beautiful - I love the red embers on the horizon, lovely....a fire sunset.
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:08:00 PM
Very nice Haiku...Jimmy
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:46:00 AM
A wonderful Haiku.. Stephen..linda
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:26:00 AM
beautiful images creating nice pen picture, Stephen
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:02:00 AM
Lovely imagery Stephen .. could feel thaat burning candle at both ends.. we all do it luv.. your last line speaks volumes luv..enjoyed..
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Date: 1/11/2011 2:54:00 AM
Excellent Haiku, red dying ember could relate to the sunrise or my eyes after an all nighter.
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