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Satan's Here

My heart drowns in bloody tears I hope the end is near Satan’s here He talks to her Puts her mind into a blur She's confused Whose side will she take? Mine or his? I’ll tell you this He’s all I am and better If he wrote her a letter It would be amazing She's dazing Into his eyes Shes hypnotized He's over taking she I fill up with jealousy I hate it You cant debate it He's the boss Dang it I guess I lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 8:22:00 AM
Interesting way of looking at things, good write....Aleera
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Date: 7/22/2009 4:10:00 AM
Pray for her Steve. Don't give up on her. That is what Satan wants. Excellent write. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2009 11:42:00 PM
Very expressive, creative and well written.
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Date: 7/20/2009 11:29:00 PM
you may have lost the fight but the battle is not yet won! although Satan has taken her for the moment right somehow does always triumph over evil and Satan's dark days will be over soon... Great write! Keep going!! Ciara=)
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Date: 7/20/2009 10:48:00 PM
We all do....Good poem friend.........:JP)
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