Satan's Here

My heart drowns in bloody tears
I hope the end is near
Satan’s here
He talks to her
Puts her mind into a blur
She's confused
Whose side will she take?
Mine or his?
I’ll tell you this 
He’s all I am and better
If he wrote her a letter
It would be amazing
She's dazing
Into his eyes
Shes hypnotized
He's over taking she
I fill up with jealousy
I hate it
You cant debate it
He's the boss
Dang it I guess I lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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De La Keur Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Interesting way of looking at things, good write....Aleera
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 4:10 AM
Pray for her Steve. Don't give up on her. That is what Satan wants. Excellent write. Love, Carol
Mcdonald Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Very expressive, creative and well written.
Ashley-Garn Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 11:29 PM
you may have lost the fight but the battle is not yet won! although Satan has taken her for the moment right somehow does always triumph over evil and Satan's dark days will be over soon... Great write! Keep going!! Ciara=)
Pickett Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 10:48 PM
We all do....Good poem friend.........:JP)
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