Satan and the Hallow Oaks: the Soldiers Bane

Satan and the Hallow Oaks: A soldier’s bane

Now gone away from the world you once knew
Finding only that  
You’re a faithful liar 
But this is the cross you bare 
The sin you follow
Fighting this curse
You only obtain burden
You learned that heaven is lost 
The Hallow Oaks burned
You know you must stand 
But alas you are weak
You’re broken
Your travels have left you weary
It’s funny
It never rained
Hot like a desert
But now you’ve fallen
Fallen from your kingdom
Here you do not rule 
Here it snows 
You’re far from the fire
But his reach is growing 
And the world…
The world is only temporary 
You know this 
But your compassion has got the better of you
You feel as though you must fight for them
Them!
They who defiled your name
Ignored your wisdom
A common solder you are not 
For now you have become the last hope
Following the wind you’re past fades future is realized
This is the solders bane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/17/2011 4:13:00 PM
Could also lead to gain though Alex, good to read you today.
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:29:00 PM
deep, and yes, it follows the first one with shadows... thanks and have a good day,..p.d.
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